"Someone sent us a riddle," Gage said, holding up the scroll. "This ‘Architect’ thinks we’re in a race against the clock. Midnight, or whatever that means."
Also, include some dialogue tags, descriptions of actions to visualize the scene, and maybe end with a cliffhanger or a twist to encourage continuation in part 112. FRATPAD - Fratpad Buddies with Gage - Part 111-...
Suddenly, the clock tower emitted a low hum, and a shadow detached itself from the wall… To Be Continued… End of Part 111 "Someone sent us a riddle," Gage said, holding up the scroll
I should start by setting the scene. Maybe start with Gage in the fratpad, interacting with his friends. Perhaps they're planning an event or dealing with the aftermath of a prank. Introducing a problem could be good—like a rival frat, a hazing gone wrong, or an internal conflict within the fraternty. Suddenly, the clock tower emitted a low hum,
